2018年10月11日雅思考試寫作預測機經(jīng)（附考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開頭）

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1、Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

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范文：

With the global economy being continuously trapped by ongoing slowdown，numerous companies are seeking for effective ways to breast their sales. Under such circumstances, it is not surprising that various sorts of advertisements are heavily bombarding our lives in virtually every front. Some experts believe that commercials, to a large extent, prevent people from pursuing their individuality primarily because they make consumers blindly purchase same products such as the latest electronic gadgets and clothes. I am, however, not convinced by this view.

隨著全球經(jīng)濟不斷被持續(xù)放緩，許多公司正在尋找刺激銷售的有效方法。在這種情況下，各種各樣的廣告幾乎在每個方面對我們的生活進行大量的轟炸就不足為奇了。一些專家認為，廣告在很大程度上阻礙了人們追求個性，主要是因為廣告讓消費者盲目購買相同的產(chǎn)品，比如最新的電子產(chǎn)品和衣服。然而，我并不相信這種觀點。

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Admittedly, massive promotion campaigns designed by manufactures could deliberately manipulate consumers’ purchasing behavior towards some specific brands of products and therefore monopolize the market, creating so called trends or fashions over a short period of time.

誠然，制造商設計的大規(guī)模促銷活動可能會故意操縱消費者對某些特定品牌產(chǎn)品的購買行為，從而壟斷市場，在短時間內(nèi)創(chuàng)造所謂的潮流或時尚。

However, it is by no means to claim that commercials would influence buyers to such an extent that they all expect to follow the same lifestyle with handsets or dresses designed by globally prestigious corporations. After all, most people choose their favorite products mainly out of personal preferences and affordability. Some luxurious perfumes and handbags, for instance, can only attract some business tycoons living in upper class with strong financial clouts rather than consumers with average incomes, who would not buy products with stylish shapes but with numerous practical functions and reasonable prices, no matter how heavily their makers are willing to spend on commercials. As the ongoing financial crisis drastically dampens people’s purchasing power, this is one of the reasons why it is ridiculous to assume that advertising can block consumers’ sensitivity to prices and qualities.

然而，并不是說商業(yè)廣告會對消費者產(chǎn)生如此大的影響，以至于他們都希望通過手機或由全球知名企業(yè)設計的服裝來追求同樣的生活方式。畢竟，大多數(shù)人選擇他們喜歡的產(chǎn)品主要是出于個人喜好和負擔能力。一些奢華的香水和手袋,例如,只能吸引一些商業(yè)大亨生活在上層階級與強勁的金融影響力,而不是消費者平均收入,誰不買產(chǎn)品和時尚的形狀,但許多實用的功能、合理的價格,無論多么嚴重的廠商愿意花在廣告上。當前的金融危機極大地削弱了人們的購買力，這就是為什么認為廣告會阻礙消費者對價格和質(zhì)量的敏感性是荒謬的。

In conclusion, despite the fact that advertisements do promote sales among different groups of people, we shall not become too conscious and expect that everyone would become fan of Apple computers or Chanel’s clothes. The more likely scenario, by contrast, is that competitions will become increasingly heated as consumers with more and more diversified tastes and needs are prompt in our current crunch time.

總之，盡管廣告確實促進了不同人群之間的銷售，但我們不應過于在意，期望每個人都成為蘋果電腦或香奈兒服裝的粉絲。相比之下，更有可能出現(xiàn)的情況是，隨著消費者的品味和需求越來越多樣化，在我們當前的緊要關(guān)頭，競爭將變得越來越激烈。

2、There is a tendency that news reports in the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. It is harmful to the individual and to the society. Do you agree or disagree?

范文：

In today’s world, we are surrounded by various kinds of news reports, which have become an essential part of our daily lives. Some people believe that news media should focus on the positive development of the society instead of the negative side. In my point of view, news reports should be objective and unbiased, whether they are good news or bad news.

在當今世界，我們被各種各樣的新聞報道所包圍，它們已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪斜夭豢缮俚囊徊糠?。有些人認為新聞媒體應該關(guān)注社會的積極發(fā)展而不是消極的一面。在我看來，新聞報道應該是客觀公正的，無論是好消息還是壞消息。

There is a widespread concern that excessive reports on problems may cause panic or instability. For instance, when people are exposed to reports on crimes too often, they tend to lack sense of security. What is worse is the detailed description of the crime cases that makes people uncomfortable. If people become over-cautious, they may lose their trust on other people and it is difficult for them to develop a harmonious interpersonal relationship.

人們普遍擔心，有關(guān)問題的過度報道可能導致恐慌或不穩(wěn)定。例如，當人們經(jīng)常接觸到犯罪報告時，他們往往缺乏安全感。更糟糕的是，犯罪案件的詳細描述讓人不舒服。如果人們變得過于謹慎，他們可能會失去對別人的信任，很難建立一個和諧的人際關(guān)系。

Despite the concern mentioned above, we should not ignore the fact that reports on problems and emergencies contribute to the solution of social problems. First of all, these reports draw people’s attention to some serious and urgent issues. For example, when a country suffers from war or natural disasters, the international community reaches their hands immediately to help the victims after they see the news reports. Also, negative reports urge the government to reflect on the deficiency of their administration and make an effort to improve their work. One case that happened in the past few decades is that in some cities the living standard of poor urban population was highly raised after their situation was revealed by the media.

盡管有上述擔憂，我們不應忽視關(guān)于問題和緊急情況的報告有助于解決社會問題這一事實。首先，這些報告引起了人們對一些嚴重而緊迫的問題的關(guān)注。例如，當一個國家遭受戰(zhàn)爭或自然災害時，國際社會在看到新聞報道后立即伸出援助之手。同時，負面報告敦促政府反思其管理的不足，并努力改進其工作。在過去的幾十年里發(fā)生的一個案例是，在一些城市，貧窮的城市人口的生活水平在他們的情況被媒體揭露后被高度提高。

In conclusion, news reports on the dark side of the society cannot be avoided and in most cases they help to solve social problems and promote the development of the society. But we should also be aware that there is no need to over-react to the negative reports.

總之，關(guān)于社會黑暗面的新聞報道是不可避免的，在大多數(shù)情況下，它們有助于解決社會問題，促進社會的發(fā)展。但我們也應該意識到，沒有必要對負面報道反應過度。

3、There is a tendency that news reports in the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. It is harmful to the individual and to the society. Do you agree or disagree?

4、Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

5、In the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences. Nowadays, places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarity? Do you think the advantages of this problem outweigh the disadvantages?

6、Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

7、Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?

8、In some countries old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

9、Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore the other parts of life. I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

10、Recently years, more and more people choose to live by themselves, why? Is it positive or negative for the development of the society?

附：考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開頭

一、中式英語

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

寫作主題 2：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

寫作主題 3：Is there fairness in today’s business world?

案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

二、胡亂翻譯中國俗語

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：胡亂翻譯中國俗語會起反作用，畢竟考官對中國俗語并不“感冒”，反而會引起考官反感。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

寫作主題 2：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

寫作主題 3：The advantage of being a nice person

案例：I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

三、超級啰嗦

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：開篇就要主題明了清晰，上來就啰啰嗦嗦表達不清，考官自然認為你的觀點模糊，甚至不會表達。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

寫作主題 2：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

四、偏離主題

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：文不對題自然會扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分數(shù)還會高么?

比如：

寫作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

五、觀點不明朗

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：雅思大作文很重要的一點就是你的邏輯性和觀點，如果觀點都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會缺乏說服力，自然分數(shù)也不會高。

比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

六、語法錯誤不斷

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：涉及到雅思寫作評分標準中的語法多樣性和準確性，語法錯誤不斷自然會成為扣分點。

比如：

寫作主題：If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

七、意思重復

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：反復重復一個意思，讓考官會覺得你并沒有什么可以表達的，或者詞匯表達能力有限，自然也會扣分。

比如：

寫作主題：Your opinion on DINK families

案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

八、觀點絕對化

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：考生在使用語言描述事物或者表達自己的觀點時，應盡可能避免語言過于絕對化，更應該注意該語言中非絕對化表達方式的學習，這樣才能盡顯文章內(nèi)容的客觀性。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

寫作主題 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

九、內(nèi)容過分簡單

討厭指數(shù)：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：考官想給你打分都沒有內(nèi)容，所以切記盡量豐富內(nèi)容，尤其不要照搬題目。

比如：

寫作主題：The importance of environmental protection

案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

十、用詞不當

討厭指數(shù)：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：用詞不當會暴露你的詞匯，而且評分標準中談到“在不同的語境中，使用正確的詞性;”所以在使用詞匯的時候，正確性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分數(shù)，那么詞匯的多樣性也要更多的納入考慮。切記，不要用口語化的表達!

比如：

寫作主題 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

寫作主題 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

總結(jié)

1.開頭切記不要用中式英語表達，多積累地道的英語表達。

2.表達的觀點要客觀明確，切勿模棱兩可絕對化。

3.內(nèi)容要清晰明了，切勿反復啰嗦，也不能一句話代之。

4.注意詞性使用，減少語法錯誤，不要生搬硬套“華麗辭藻”。

總之，在備考雅思寫作的時候還是要多多積累豐富的素材，學習地道的語言表達方式，一定要多動手寫!!!不斷地練習和修改，才能提升雅思寫作能力。

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