2016年7月9日雅思大作文解析

在剛剛結(jié)束的7月9日雅思寫(xiě)作考試中，雅思官方再次在大作文環(huán)節(jié)考查了“教育類”的題目。看來(lái)最近“教育類”考題熱度不減。今天，我們留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師將給大家?guī)?lái)雅思大作文的深度解析和范文。

本次考試題目如下：

There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

這道題是一道雙邊論證的老題。本題的背景是現(xiàn)在有很多針對(duì)兒童的廣告，例如零食、玩具等。家長(zhǎng)感覺(jué)廣告商是在給孩子施壓，而廣告商則認(rèn)為廣告提供了有用的信息。

Sample Response

There has been a heated debate between parents and advertisers towards the increasing children-aimed advertisements. I am going to analyze and give my own opinion in this essay. 

Parents claim that the advertisers put their children under pressure. Children are too young to tell the right from wrong and are more prone to be influenced or attracted by the advertisements. Many children try very hard to persuade their parents to buy them the toys shown in advertisements. If their children don’t have the latest toy, the other kids may push them aside. As a consequence, those kids would suffer from loneliness and peer pressure. Gradually, it will have a negative effect on children’s mental health and interpersonal skills. So parents are strongly against those advertisements aiming at children. 

On the other hand, the advertisers defend themselves and believe they provide useful information for both children and parents. The advertisers think that advertisements of products like guidance books can benefit all the children especially when they struggle with their studies. After the launch of those advertisements, many children have done better in the exams. Without such information, some children may have lost the chance to have a good academic achievement. So the advertisers claim their products are beneficial. 

In my opinion, both parents and advertisers’ views make sense. But there are many fake and defective products in the market and those products can be a hazard for children’s health, mental, behavioral and personal development. I believe it’s the government’s obligation to standardize the contents of advertisements and limit the frequency shown on TV.

(總字?jǐn)?shù)：273)

以上就是我們的老師提供的原創(chuàng)范文，希望大家可以多多模仿和練習(xí)。

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